Revisions to pitch and final decisions in light of feedback - 40

The Pitch:Revision

Our pitch gained some feedback which consisted of both positive and negative. We are glad that the feedback was given so we could reevaluate what we need to improve and for us to make sure that everything is precise and clarified so that we are aware of what we are doing and there will be no need to keep double-checking or to keep changing. From the feedback we realised and consolidated that we need to revise our pitch and make amends.

What really went well?

Well what was commonly said about our pitch which really went well was the title credits. Our title credits were really a strong part of our pitch. The detail in the typeface and fonts we used was present and showing what we have already commenced on was really impressive. Our soundtrack was also liked as it was said that is suited our Youth drama and the whole concept of the film.

Our mise en scene - props and costumes etc. was really good also as it was clear what the characters were going to be wearing.

Would be better if?

There was few feedbacks on what we should improve. It was really good constructive criticism as it will enable us to go over where we are lacking or where we went wrong

Our storyline was good but had to more clarified because it gave a sense that there was no story when that is not the case. Also our storyboard to be updated as there are a few changes and what was said to be a good idea was to make an animatic of our storyboard so that we have a clear understanding of what comes next in sequence and how we are going to do each shot.

Because we were not really quite sure where the location was going to be therefore we need to add a location and be precise so that we are on board with the filming. We clear what the setting would look like which was really good but just need to be s=certain on the location.

There was a feedback where we need to understand the social groups being represented. We included that there was going to be working-class and gangs however we forgot to include what ethnicity the characters were.

Overall

Overall it was said that our pitch was really good and our little extract of our title sequence is top notch and it was a film to be looking forward to.