Wednesday 4th March

On this day, we had recieved feedback from Rebecca, whereby she said to edit our film by cutting down scenes and slowing down a few shots as well for effect as it would create emphasis on the mood and tone of our work and engage our audience.
From the feedback we've made a few of Mels scenes, such as the one at the end where he walks off, in slow motion. We have also cut out scenes between the characters handshaking as the space between one character and another was too long and made it look unrealistic.
We enjoyed editing this part of the film as it clearly showed how much better the work had looked afterwards.