Feedback from Dan:

From Dans feedback we have loads of things to improve our work on:
Shortening and cutting a few atmospheric scenes
Match cut improvements
Slowen down a few shots


1 - Shortening and cutting a few atmospheric scenes
This can be done through our editing process using final cut pro, this will help prevent "clutter" in our work and will also allow us to focus more on the characters.

2 - Matchcut improvements
This can be done by timingly editing out our scenes in the correct order of the characters, this will help understand the role of the character and also prevent the video from looking incorrect.

3 - Slowen down a few shots
This can be done using final cut pro, and slowing down a few shots will help emphasise the characters and thier roles to the audience. This will also create a dramatic look and feel into our film, by slowing it down.