Our work is still in the process of editing, however we wanted a feedback from our teacher in order to see what we could improve on alongside us editing. We have taken alot of points on board such as "shorting/cutting out a few of the atmospheric scenes". In order to shorten the film, as well as to show more of the characters this time round, and prevent overpacking of our scenes.
Things that were liked:
Football scene - which shows the transition between characters lifestyle
Different types of shots - Atmosphere, close ups, wide range of angles
Different character roles
Things to improve on:
Shortening and cutting a few atmospheric scenes
Match cut improvements
Slowen down a few shots
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