Feedback:
As a team we need to improve our youth drama, from the feedback of both Dan and Rebecca our storyline needs to include more shots and direction in order to make more sense this will help to improve and make our film better.
Dan and Rebecca both loved our title seqences as it enforced our urban youth drama and was sleek against the background music which all our group helped to make. The plot of the film was also liked, we had some really good editing techniques.
What to expect and improve on?
As a team we will include more scenes and add more shots, we have planned to include scenes of the main character in a football scene just before he returns back to his estate. We have also decided to include more shots of all the characters with more close ups and medium shots. In the end, our group 32 Fi Dem film will blow!
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